That's thusfar my critique, but other than that, your work indeed retains the look of Vanilla while carrying the feel and detail one would come to expect if they were to really live there. So, I guess it would help give your treatment even more character if you change the decal they used on the ground there. I've been to some scummier cities, and even if there's unmentionable goo on the ground, it had some texture in some way, be it greasy, grainy, or watery. Lastly, that greenish puddle on the ground near the entrance from the landing pad: it really looks tacky how Obsidian just plopped a green blob (and a low res one at that) on the ground like that. If that's not the case, then I apologize for mentioning it, but as far as I'm concerned, the JekkJekkTarr needs to look as colorful as it does in Vanilla in order to retain that charm. Second, well if your second shots are of the JekkJekkTarr, I feel your treatment removes its special quality of being visually vibrant and distinctly alien with its neon-sabrelike lighting fixtures.